Sunman Short: Act One - Scene Two

Since my last post:

- renewed my superherosunman.com domain
- attended writers-actors-directors ( WAD) session last week, getting some more feedback
- last couple days, wrote the (extreme action) second scene of the Sunman short film project
- saw Spiderman 2 again while chilling out with friends on Easter weekend
- did another edit of the first scene of the Sunman short film project, especially the key openning paragraph or two ( to speed the plough for all you astute script readers out there... )
- did some trademark related measures
- achieved world peace, and orange juice for all ( okay, not quite that.. )

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Some general notes re the WAD session, feedback on my spec Requiem of a Blade Runner screenplay's poignant concluding scene ( that I've been giving a reworking as well ) indicated a favorable reaction, aside from a few script wording type things, mostly near off the top of the scene in a description heavy part.

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Here's an example:

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Startled, Deckard bumps back into a couch, spills his drink.

Chronologically, spacially wise, should be rather:

Startled, Deckard steps back, bumps into a couch spilling his drink.

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I continue working on this off and on again for the exercise of doing that, and who knows, there's an off chance it could get a look at someday (by the right's holders) . Besides, I like having a few different things on the go at the same time to mix things up once in a while.

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One thing I should get back at is my Real Real Gone screenplay, but of course the main soup d'jour must be the a primary focus on my superhero Sunman based projects, especially the feature length, and short film, screenplays for them.

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Upcoming: the next WAD session where I'll have on hand the revised Sunman short, openning Scene One, plus the just added on Scene Two, and likely also the Requiem End Scene revision.

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Like I mentioned before, I might very well post online the openning scene to the superhero Sunman Prequel short film project that features Sky - the guy who becomes Sunman.

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One task to be accomplished over the next few weeks is the rounding up of an artist or two who can work with me on the short film project.

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Stay tuned for more later.